Am I Keyword Stuffing My Title -Please Help?

[dlyricist]

Dear All,

I am trying to target two keywords - "love poems" & "romantic poems"
and my title page is currently set to "Lyricist Of Romantic Poems Lyrics | Lyrical Love Poems & More For You"
Should it be reset and will cover my keywords targets to something like
"Lyricist of Lyrical Romantic Love Poems Songwriting & More For You"?
I have noticed that when doing a search for "romantic poems" on Google, that that top 5 (though the rest do) don't have "romantic poems" but rather along the lines of "romantic love poems or poetry" titles
Also I have done a Google webmaster crawl check and no duplicate issues were found

IMHO of any sort much appreciated

[aks2008]

yes, I think you are stuffing keywords in the title. I would suggest you to make changes in the title page.

[dlyricist]

Dear All,

If I re-write it to "D Lyricist | Original Lyrical Romantic Love Poems & More For You"

will it cover both romantic poems & love poems as well as branding in one?

again, any IMHO of any sort much appreciated

[digitalseo]

yes..that is much better than the first one...try to check it in google or use adwords to get some clue..